I Live In A Small Town In Rural Ohio, There Are Rules That Must Be Followed.
September 8, 2026
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5 min readIn a small Ohio farming town of 1,500 people, the rules are not suggestions or superstitions—they are a matter of survival. The narrator, David, has lived there his entire life, and he has seen the rules take his father, his classmates, and his girlfriend. The rules are simple to state but brutal to break: close your eyes from 8:10 to 8:25 twice a day; never look at the second sun that appears from 12:30 to 1:00; never stare at birds, especially raptors; break any mirror whose reflection looks wrong; and never look into the eyes of the eyeless. Break one, and you lose an eye—neatly severed, as if by a surgeon. Break it badly, and you lose more than that.
The Rules and Their Consequences
The first rule is the one David's father broke. Hungover after a celebration, he forgot to close his eyes when the 8:10 bell rang. Within seconds, his left eye was gone, severed cleanly at the optic nerve. The town is prepared for this; most people carry gauze, and the local doctor performs eye-removal surgery with practiced efficiency. But the physical loss was only the beginning. David's father became hollow, then bitter, and finally fled the town entirely, leaving David with his stepmother Navia. "I'm not staying in this death trap any longer," he shouted before driving away, never to return.
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What you'll learn
- 1 Timestamped Outline
- 2 (00:48) **Town Introduction** - The narrator describes his small Ohio town of 1,500 people, its landmarks (Downtown Donuts, Winderson's Feed and Seed, the Buckeye Bar), and his strained relationship with the place
- 3 (03:08) **Father's Rule-Breaking Incident** - The narrator recounts the day his hungover father broke Rule #1 by failing to close his eyes during the 8:10-8:25 window
- 4 (09:54) **Father's Transformation and Departure** - After losing his eye, the narrator's father becomes catatonic for three days, then bitter and violent, ultimately leaving town
- 5 (16:45) **The Rules Explained** - Navia tells the 11-year-old narrator that his father probably won't return, and explains the town's first rule
- 6 (21:50) **Rule #2: The Second Sun** - The narrator describes the second sun that appears from 12:30-1:00, making everything colder but crops grow magnificently
- 7 (27:23) **The Second Sun's Consequence** - Both children's eyes are instantly burned and melted when they look at the second sun
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Show Notes
Follow these rules or else. Written by: Dwovar
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